Blurbs

Just a dream- Carrie Underwood: There is a girl and a boy that get married in a church really young. After they get married he goes off to war and dies not to long after. So his body is sent back to be buried back home. She is very upset and says multiple times that she was counting on forever and that she will never know what that will be like.

Teardrops on my guitar- Taylor Swift: This girl is friends with this boy Drew but she is secretly in love with him. But Drew is in love with another girl and has no idea that the girl likes him. Drew always talks about this one girl that he likes and she is upset and can`t stop thinking about her.

Our Song - Taylor Swift: It is about a girl and her boyfriend. They are driving in the car and she has an upset look on her and he asks her whats wrong and she says " I was just thinking how we don't have a song"
and he explains to her that we do that our song is sneaking out late, talking on the phone late at night, etc.

BBQ-Tim Mcgraw: There is this 17 year old guy that goes down to the county fair for labor day weekend and he meets this girl in the ticket line. So they go out and skip rocks on the rail road tracks and he explains that he had a barbeque stain on his white t-shirt and she had a mini skirt and red lip stick. Then after it was over and five years later he was on a plane to see some friends in New orleans and he saw her and they remembered the past.

Live like you were dying- Tim Mcgraw: There was man in his early 40s and he is in the hospital bed and has found out that he has cancer and his friend asks him what is it like to get that kind of news and he says that it makes you want to do everything you never got to do in your life and do it.  He also said I hope you have the chance to live like you were dying. His whole perspective of life was different after he got that news.

Top Ten Sixers

#1. Like penguins, and escamos, and ICE!  (cool runnings)

#2. Im the powerful, pleasurable, indestructable, mushu. (mulan)

#3. I hope I find true love.

#4. This will be our little secret.

#5. It is not a big deal.

#6. Never lived when I was young
#7. Hey its me, how are you.

#8. I still believe in Santa Claus.

#9.We were just trying to help.

#10. Are you out of your mind.

Song Lyrics

This is the link to the lyrics of the song:
 http://www.elyrics.net/read/c/carrie-underwood-lyrics/just-a-dream-lyrics.html         

This is the link to the music video: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jLntFKtR66g
or http://www.cmt.com/videos/carrie-underwood/263454/just-a-dream.jhtml

Just a dream by Carrie Underwood

                           
Plot: This girl gets married and her husband goes to war and dies. His body is sent back home to be buried.

Character: There is a girl who gets married to a boy who is in the military. The members in audience of the wedding and funeral. Military men shooting gun shots at funeral.

Conflict: The girls husband gets killed in war.

Theme: She did not realize that he may die in war. She probably thought that he would never die and they would live happily ever after, forever.

Setting: In the car. At the church for the wedding. At the funeral.

The Impulse #2

Rachel has been noticing some weird things about her boyfriend David. A couple weeks ago he did a marathon and his secretary susie ran it with him and he hugged her when they finished the race and not Rachel.  Also last friday he could not have dinner with Rachel because he had to stay late to work on some things he was behind in. So Rachel comes up to his office to surprise him and take him to lunch and she see`s David with his hands around her helping her with the printer. She says:

R: What the crap is this?
D: Rachel what are you doing here?
R: I came here to take you to lunch. What are you doing?
D: I am helping Susie with the printer.
R: ya right ?! Its over were done!
Rachel runs out and starts running to the elevator and David chases after her and meets her at the elevator and David says:
D: Rachel, what is wrong? Why are you saying its over?
R: because I saw you with your arms around her.
D: WHAT! No I was helping her with the printer and I was helping pull papers out.
R: Ok whatever. What about the time you ran the marathon and you hugged her and not me.
D: I did not know you were there and I was just giving her a hug saying "good job, we did it".
R: Well what about the time you did not come to dinner because you said you had to finish some work. Was she there with you?
D: Yes but nothing happened we were just working on work.
R: ok why should I believe you?
D: Because I love you and you should trust me
R: Fine but you are going to have to swear that you don't have anything envolved with her.
D: I swear I don't.
R: Fine I trust you. So where does this put us?
D: I thought we were still together?
R: Ya we are

The Beat

Well first of for Mr. Nelson thanks for the comment that sounds like it would be better to do that. That sounds like a good idea. Well when it comes to the action it could of been better I could have made more action with the scene and also with the conflict. I could have made them fight more and make them have more conflict then it does. With the event I think it had an event and him and her definetly got what they wanted. I think I could of also done it in the office and made it better, from an idea from nelson. But I do think I could of had her brake up with him and have them fight in more ways then others. I also thought I ended it to quick she did not fight back and be strong all she did was... ok you were not cheating on me then I love you again. I know that was not a good way to end it. Hopefully I can get it to have more action, and more conflict in the next impulse.