Sunday, November 21, 2010

Song Lyrics

This is the link to the lyrics of the song:
 http://www.elyrics.net/read/c/carrie-underwood-lyrics/just-a-dream-lyrics.html         

This is the link to the music video: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jLntFKtR66g
or http://www.cmt.com/videos/carrie-underwood/263454/just-a-dream.jhtml

Just a dream by Carrie Underwood
                           
Plot: This girl gets married and her husband goes to war and dies. His body is sent back home to be buried.

Character: There is a girl who gets married to a boy who is in the military. The members in audience of the wedding and funeral. Military men shooting gun shots at funeral.

Conflict: The girls husband gets killed in war.

Theme: She did not realize that he may die in war. She probably thought that he would never die and they would live happily ever after, forever.

Setting: In the car. At the church for the wedding. At the funeral.

Sunday, November 14, 2010

The Impulse #2

Rachel has been noticing some weird things about her boyfriend David. A couple weeks ago he did a marathon and his secretary susie ran it with him and he hugged her when they finished the race and not Rachel.  Also last friday he could not have dinner with Rachel because he had to stay late to work on some things he was behind in. So Rachel comes up to his office to surprise him and take him to lunch and she see`s David with his hands around her helping her with the printer. She says:

R: What the crap is this?
D: Rachel what are you doing here?
R: I came here to take you to lunch. What are you doing?
D: I am helping Susie with the printer.
R: ya right ?! Its over were done!
Rachel runs out and starts running to the elevator and David chases after her and meets her at the elevator and David says:
D: Rachel, what is wrong? Why are you saying its over?
R: because I saw you with your arms around her.
D: WHAT! No I was helping her with the printer and I was helping pull papers out.
R: Ok whatever. What about the time you ran the marathon and you hugged her and not me.
D: I did not know you were there and I was just giving her a hug saying "good job, we did it".
R: Well what about the time you did not come to dinner because you said you had to finish some work. Was she there with you?
D: Yes but nothing happened we were just working on work.
R: ok why should I believe you?
D: Because I love you and you should trust me
R: Fine but you are going to have to swear that you don't have anything envolved with her.
D: I swear I don't.
R: Fine I trust you. So where does this put us?
D: I thought we were still together?
R: Ya we are

Wednesday, November 10, 2010

The Beat

Well first of for Mr. Nelson thanks for the comment that sounds like it would be better to do that. That sounds like a good idea. Well when it comes to the action it could of been better I could have made more action with the scene and also with the conflict. I could have made them fight more and make them have more conflict then it does. With the event I think it had an event and him and her definetly got what they wanted. I think I could of also done it in the office and made it better, from an idea from nelson. But I do think I could of had her brake up with him and have them fight in more ways then others. I also thought I ended it to quick she did not fight back and be strong all she did was... ok you were not cheating on me then I love you again. I know that was not a good way to end it. Hopefully I can get it to have more action, and more conflict in the next impulse.

Sunday, October 31, 2010

The Impulse

A woman at the bus station sitting on a bench, waiting for a bus to come. A man running to the bus station while it is pouring rain outside. Finally ends up at the bus station and says....

Man- Stop!! Don't leave
Woman- Why not
Man- Because I love you
Woman- Then why did you cheat on me.
Man- What I did not cheat on you
Woman- yes you did, I saw you proposing to your secretary susie earlier. I came to your work to surprise you and take you to lunch and I heard you proposing to her.
Man- haha. No what happened was, I was going to propose to you at dinner tommorow night and I was practicing with susie so that I could get everything right when I proposed to you.
Woman- Oh!?!? I thought....
Man- Honey I am sorry you thought that I was cheating. But I am not. I love you and I want to spend the rest of my life with you. Will you marry me?
Woman-  YES! yes! yes of course I will.
Man- I love you
Woman- I love you too.

Sunday, October 17, 2010

Bad Poetry


Rockade

I wanted to make lemonade
But I did not have any lemons
So I thought I would use rocks
I tried to squeeze them and get the juice out
But nothing came out  
So I was kind of bummed.  





Sunday, October 3, 2010

Direct Orders

Rock out like school just ended for the school year and it's summertime. Rock out like you finally made it to the end of a bad day. Rock out like you just got a 36 on the ACT. Rock out like you favorite song just came on while you were driving. Rock out like you just won Cafe Rio for a year. Rock out like you boyfriend just held your hand. Rock out like you had a billion dollars in cash to do whatever. Rock out like you just got braces off after 4 years of having them on. Rock out like you just saw your favorite Actor or Actress walking down the street. Rock out like you just don't care. Rock out like your favorite movie just came out on dvd. Rock out like you just got asked out to the person you have always wanted to go out on a date with. Rock out like you just got proposed too. Rock out like your parents just bought you a brand new car for your sixteenth birthday. ROCK OUT!

Shake The Dust

This is for the people who have never been able to fall in love. This is for the people who can't get you out of their mind. This is for the people who want to know who their future spouse is. This is for the boys who who don't get the girls mind. Shake the dust! This is for the athletes that never made it on a team. This is for the kids who never had anyone come to their lemonade stand. This is for the kids who want to drive but can't because they are to young. Shake The Dust! This is for the adults who have lost their job because of the bad economy. This is for the Army wives and families who have had loved ones die for our freedom. This is for the kids who got teased in school. This is for the kids who got picked last in gym class. This is for the kids who never got to experience it all. SHAKE THE DUST!